Initial Thoughts: thisclose to a Did Not Finish.
Characters: 3 – So loved Volaris, a mean a cute nerdy girl who invents things, whats not to love? Odessa on the other hand, well I had some issues with her.
Plot: 2 – The story left a lot to be desired. It wrapped up way too quickly and I just wanted more
Originality: 4 – For me what was one of the only things I liked. It was original, the necromancer thing isn’t done that often
Predictability: 2 – I don’t want to give anything away, but I knew who the villain was as soon as I meet him/her.
Romance: 1 – Yup a 1. And trust me it is not the reason you may be thinking. Odessa, WOW, you moved on fast girl. I am not advocating sitting around moping but, just no.
World Building: 2 – Okay so if you have a certain eye color you can train to have a specific magic, whaat? And what are all the different magics, do they all have to do with eye color? So many questions!
Bottom Line: Not one I would recommend.
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